here is another 100 word challenge this is week 12's one!
On a dark scary night at 2:15 in the morning a little annoying girl woke up, she remembered the dream she had that night. There was a kangaroo that had jumped from the tree house her parents made for her on christmas day. He was holding a little can of baked beans, the kangaroo then brought the baked beans to life and they opened themselves and covered the girls head in them. Yuk she exclaimed now I have to wash my hair and my clothes again. The girl woke up and told herself “well that was definitely a dream!!”
By Zavannah
Wow Zavanna. Wow.
ReplyDeleteVery baked bean involved and funny. I love how you have added a bit of talking in there. Next time, maybe add the metaphors and simalieΕ to engage the reader more.
~Kezia~
Kia Ora Zavannah.
ReplyDeleteI was reading your 100 word challenge and thought that it was pretty good. I was just wondering why it was a scary night, also you have spelt yuck wrong. Otherwise pretty good peice, I would hate it aswell if I had baked beans spilled over me.
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Kia Ora Zavannah.
ReplyDeleteI was reading your 100 word challenge and thought that it was pretty good. I was just wondering why it was a scary night, also you have spelt yuck wrong. Otherwise pretty good peice, I would hate it aswell if I had baked beans spilled over me.
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